|Reviews for UnderOverfilled|
| sprinkled clean chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
I love the image that ‘little pocket of my heart’ brings—it’s such a cute phrase. I also love the line ‘this tired heart doesn’t love although it wants to’ because it’s just a raw, powerful way of stating a truth and it’s most likely the thing I’ll remember from this work. Overall, the first stanza sounded hopeful but it turned out to be something sadder, and the pocket comes up again although not used in a cute way anymore, which I thought was an effective way in piecing together this poem from beginning to end.
I’m not fond of the formatting of this piece, though; I just don’t think it adds much to the actual meaning of the poem.
- from the Reviewing Crusade forum