Reviews for The Chessmaster
Primordial Of the Seas chapter 12 . 3/2
Nice story, Draws you in...your good I'll just say...you probably already knew that...Lol
-Atalanta
p.s. Guess who i am ? dead give away lol...
grapefruitpixie chapter 11 . 12/25/2017
Interesting story. Keep it up.
Locked Room Lover chapter 2 . 11/2/2017
Okay, so far I am intrigued.
Then again, I was intrigued by the very description as being refreshingly honest about its inspiration and I also love your username.
But I also feel like Isekai trash is selling this story short, you don't seem to be following all of the story beats and have come up with some kind of interesting background for the protagonist that I have to find out about. All in all, not bad, I will keep reading.
LDF chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
This is far too short for a first chapter. Remember that your first chapter is your opportunity to hook your reader – in other words, to show them what makes your story unique and worth reading