Reviews for Where the White Moss Grows |
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![]() ![]() ![]() No need to apologise for the italics - they're a okay in my book. I like how you start off with the main character commenting on the state of the weather, that was a good way to hook me in. The descriptions that accompany this piece are good, but what really makes this piece good is its flow. I find that flow is important for flash fiction to keep me invested, and you certainly nailed flow down. Good work. To satisfy my own curiosity: Since you said this was written for English, can I ask how many marks the teacher gave you? You don't have to respond if you don't feel like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very touching story. I'm glad she came to terms about her brother's death. ~Sir Scott |