|Reviews for Cry of the Mer Part Two - Heart of a Mer|
| theeclairsofcustardcrumble chapter 1 . 10/8
Wowwww, this was so welly written! I can't wait to keep going!
| MagicalKitKat chapter 1 . 10/2
I just discovered this series and while I haven't yet finished the first book (I'm on chapter 12), I can say without a doubt that this is going to be one of my favorite series of all time. I really appreciate that you have taken the time to create such an incredible and unique storyline, instead of publishing another half-digested The Little Mermaid knockoff the way so many other fiction writers do when writing about mermaids. I also love how dynamic all of your characters are. I can't stand it when people write side characters as nothing more than plot devices and don't give them ANY background whatsoever, but even obscure characters like Elizabeth have sufficient background information and decently developed personalities. I have absolutely fallen in love with your writing style and I can't wait to see more. I honestly wouldn't be surprised to see one of your books at Barnes & Noble some day. I would love to give you some constructive criticism, but I really can't find anything to critique. Sorry if this is a bit long for a review, but I just wanted to let you know that your work is not going unappreciated. Good luck with your writing and may writers' block never become a familiar concept. :D
| Jess Palmer chapter 33 . 9/10
Like where the story's headed, but sad the chapters seem to be getting shorter... wish I could keep reading!
| Jess Palmer chapter 31 . 9/7
Beautiful chapter. Hope you update soon. :)
| Spazthemagicbeanstalk chapter 30 . 8/16
Great chapter, as usual. You do a great job portraying realistic emotions And reactions in your characters! And I can't wait for reunion scene, I'm so excited! Although it will likely be heartbreaking as Riley finds out what she missed too...
| Catter the Mad chapter 22 . 6/29
What a coincidence! :P
| MagicianManx chapter 15 . 5/11
Fantasy won't be updating tonight because of technical difficulties, sorry!
| Catter the Mad chapter 13 . 4/27
Rejection after all this time? I'm scared.
| Niyati chapter 10 . 4/13
| Jess Palmer chapter 6 . 3/22
I'm so excited to have this story back! Thanks for returning to it and I can't wait for your next update! :)
| Someone chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
| asamoahmcqueen chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
Please Fantasy how can I go to your patreon to continue reading the Cry of a met
I am in love with it.. I read it Quotev and u have followed you here please
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
Pretty much what Serin said except for the fact that it's a month's worth of protein, so a half dose could last for at least two weeks and allow them to check what it is. It's actually really easy for a modern lab to take something, see what it is, and then reproduce it.
This plot just seems really forced.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
Update plz *puppy eyes*
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Plz plz plz PLZ update!