Reviews for You're Going To Make It
pfft chapter 3 . 12/20/2017
Not bad. However, I have a suggestion. You wrote 'dinosaurs do not name their chicks until they leave the nest'. Since you have decided to make the dinosaurs talk, why not have different dinosaurs have different cultures? As an example, people in ancient times would re-use names if one child died, so they'd have a long string of 'Josephs'.