Reviews for Lost in Plain Sight
RunnerQuest chapter 30 . 4/24
Awwww! This was so sweet! Loved how you portrayed Ainsleigh, she was just so down to earth and relatable. You also did a fantastic job showing how Nick was trying to balance his faith—I thought it was cool how he confessed to Ainsleigh that he struggled with it too. Aw man, and that scene when she first takes him by the grave site...whoa, that was just so sad! I just loved these two, you wrote them both so amazingly. I have to say, Evan’s my favorite character! He’d be a cool pal to have around! You always need a buddy that’s gonna stand by you no matter what! Excellent writing, I thought it was great! I’d love to see more of your stories! Thanks again for sharing!
daoak chapter 5 . 11/22/2017
Marvelous i love this i think yelling at God, is something we all should do. Did that yesterday and today felt relieved.