The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or

So... where’s this story that was in your head while you were transcribing this one?

A good story as always

Hi! Just thought I'd tell you that I recently discovered your stories, and absolutely love them! Thank you for sharing them!

I'm sure that men and women in uniform regularly question "Why do we do this?" and they don't always find satisfactory answers. Very realistic conversation at the end of a bad day.

First, welcome home. I had suspected you had been deployed and I missed your stories. Thanks for another tale in this series!

New story! Yay! I love it. And it has Hammer in it :)

I'm glad Ronni had a happy ending. It was also nice to have Kim on my home turf!

Now set Kim after the scum that killed Sgt Day!

Knew you were going to do something to that nice Sgt. You spent way too much time setting him up for him to be an incidental. Hope he survives.

I've been re-reading some back stories and there is one with a drop-in line about Ronni, their retired MWD. I fear for Sgt Day!

I like Sgt. Day. Please take good care of him and Ronni. Might be nice side story on how Ronni got her rank?

I've REALLY missed you, Doc! So glad you are back. I've been out of the loop long enough to have to look up some of your terms! And I've only been retired 3 years! Thanks!