|Reviews for Being a Magical Girl: A Guide for the Average|
| The Youngest Mistress chapter 1 . 10/24/2017
This is pretty okay so far. When I read about your character becoming a magical girl after she meets Alexa, I quickly thought of the anime Madoka Magica. I wish you would put in more depth in your characters, such as what do they like, such as hair or eye color, or even what they are wearing. And oh, this isn't mean, but um, when I saw 'a satire on the magical girl genre', I thought of 'Cute High Earth Defense Club Love', which even though it's a Magical GUY anime, it's also a satire on the genre as well.
Good luck with your fic.