|Reviews for Just An Ordinary Day|
| T. D. Fagan chapter 2 . 12/16
Cute and funny, too! I would like to have had some clue about Jamie's age to make it easier to visualize him, but since it was apparent that he was fairly young, that really wasn't an issue.
One minor punctuation point is the comma instead of a period at the very end. Separating the final line from the 'whisper' dialogue tag also looked odd, but separating that made it stand out more, so that was understandable.
Fun addition to the series! Thanks for sharing.
| T. D. Fagan chapter 1 . 10/30
Yay! I'm so glad you decided to publish this one! It has a good opening that makes the reader wonder why, an excellent buildup, and a great punchline-type conclusion. It's really well done, and, as is so important to drabbles, feels really complete. Great job!
I'm looking forward to reading more from your collection.
| DemigodessOfEternity chapter 6 . 10/25
Hilarious! Though perhaps not a daily occurrence lol :)
| DemigodessOfEternity chapter 4 . 10/21
This is hilarious! Great job!
| SparrowsOfTheTrees chapter 3 . 10/20
I love the humor added to a otherwise serious concept
| SparrowsOfTheTrees chapter 2 . 10/19
| SparrowsOfTheTrees chapter 1 . 10/19
I love how humorous