Reviews for Made of precious ores
naaah chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
I'm attached to this piece on a very deep personal level.. as if you wrote about me.. really good job done there, keep it up!
T. D. Fagan chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
What a sad tale! However, I like that, even in the midst of what seems to be depression, there is still hope for her if someone can help her by offering hope.

You might want to start each line with a capital letter, or at least at the start of a new sentence.

Very nice job.
TalesOfTreesAndStars chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Wow... Really powerful. I love the lines gold for a heart/ iron for a brain and the way they rhyme with the ones above. The only thing I noticed is on the line that says, “if she’s happy than why does she,” and it should be then instead of than. Thanks for the awesome poem!