Reviews for Elodie and June
MorganaLeFay678 chapter 1 . 11/3
I love this so much! so many emotions, it sounds great! keep writing!
potatocroquettes chapter 1 . 10/26
wo this was great, what a great writer u are.
Gypsy Marie chapter 1 . 10/24
Very descriptive. I attempted to act it out in my head. It flows very well. Im interested in Elodies story and how June ties into it. As well as to how June may or may not teach Elodie to become a "lighter" version of the heavy person she currently is.
Octavia chapter 1 . 10/23
Hi wow this is so nice. The play format fits it really well, and it has an amazingly great impact. Elodie has an interesting character, and i hope to see her develop as this goes on! Your writing has been improving so much lately, you've become so good at creating complex characters and seemingly simple settings that just mesh really well. I'm so glad you keep writing, you manage to hint at such layered stories in so few words, and its honestly incredible. Great job!