Reviews for The Gray Ranger: Unforgiven
DogGoesMoo chapter 3 . 11/29
The pacing fit this chapter well. It was fast and encompassed the action well. I also like the interaction between Kulga and Tikta. They play off each other well.

It was [omr] of only two in Everdry - one?
DogGoesMoo chapter 2 . 11/29
The Gray Ranger seems like the typical smart ass hero but let's hope there's a heart somewhere in there. This is starting to look like an old west inspired story, what with the desert, talk of guns and raiding gangs... but with magic.

Zam and Zagyr [and] more than enough - are
DogGoesMoo chapter 1 . 11/29
I really like the story so far. It flows well and you do a good job introducing the characters of Adlis and Za. Although I wonder how they got there if they don't know that it would takes multiple coaches for them to get home.

He scratched [be] back of his neck awkwardly. - the

Good chapter.