|Reviews for Control|
| Blue Tapioca chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
The second line is confusing, what do you mean by "It is the only uncertainty"?
I love the concept of this work although I do not understand the concept of the walls forcing those with a flashlight to change directions. "Control" in my opinion is not a good title for this piece, I would suggest the names, "Artificial Light" or to keep with the concept of reality versus fiction maybe, "The Walls of the Star Makers".
Summary in one sentence: Realist destroying the dreams of the dreamers because they are unrealistic dreams.