Reviews for The Nightmare |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Nice to see the story is back ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing so far, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Long time no see :) I'm glad you're still working on this fic. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you're continuing this! I reread it all, and I can't wait to see more :) |
![]() ![]() I was so excited to see an update so quick! Great chapter, why does he want her to read to him? I can’t wait to read what happens next. |
![]() ![]() I’m really enjoying this story. I also like the plots of all your stories and your writing style. I’m really looking forward to reading future chapters of this story. Hope to see an update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m super excited that you are picking this up again. I was worried that we’d never see another chapter. Great writing, as always. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Good chapter. Hope you can get the next one up soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read your other stories and I can see that you like to recycle your main characters; it's not necessarily a bad thing … in a way, I almost felt like I was reading parallel universes of their lives. And there is no question that you write them well but then after reading the same characterizations over and over again, it can become predictable even if the setting is different. They can certainly be captivating for first-time readers but for non-first timers, the freshness wears away. But back to this particular story, I like how you finally had Milaina ask the #1 question we were all thinking of: out of all the prisoners, why has Der Albtraum been picking on her? I already had my own suspicions since the first meeting and something I suspected he must have left out here in his explanation to her: his unwanted (?) attraction to her appearance is what must have caught his eye first. Otherwise, he wouldn't have bothered asking her to come read to him that first time, not to mention assigning her such a strange task in the first place. I appreciate the fact that you kept his ruthlessness despite how he's drawn to her. His feelings are certainly at odds with his duty. Yet, it's not even a normal attraction - he really does he see her as something beneath him. Romance is not something I see blossoming here, not a healthy one at least. Hence, the genres you placed this in. But I'm glad that despite the fear Milaina must feel (as she should be), she still has a certain stubbornness about her. How will this end? I am not sure but as you had hinted at, I don't see a good ending for either of them. |
![]() ![]() I can't wait to see what happens next with this story! Looking forward to your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot. Can't wait for next update |
![]() ![]() Wow that was a fast update. Please continue this story. I want to know what happens next. |
![]() ![]() More action yaaaaaass |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Cheers! |
![]() ![]() Waiting for the next update! |