Reviews for joining hearts
Guest chapter 11 . 12/22/2017
Please write more...!
-mom-
Guest chapter 11 . 12/22/2017
I love it! This story is so suspenseful! I cannot wait to read more! It's so funny! Please try & describe stuff more! But, other than that, the story is so awesome! It is a real page turner & so hillarious! Never change the characters! Just add to it & never stop writting! U are a wonderful storyteller! Do not ever let anyone discourage you from writting! Keep writting & writing & writting & ...! Do not ever stop being u!
Love,
Mom
Guest chapter 7 . 11/12/2017
I love it dennis! Keep writing its in your blood & u are great at it! But u need to work on proper punctuation & i do not think it is romance! It sounds like it is more comedy! Romance has lots of sex it it & your dose not have any! But i love it! Keep writting!
Love,
Mom