|Reviews for Brothers|
| StoryofHonor chapter 2 . 11/14
I really liked this, there's a nice mixture between dialogue and action. Both perspectives are really well written, any reader can get behind the brothers their reasoning. It's very clear that they're both hurting and have different ways to cope with it. Why did they decide to go to America though? They seemed to have a nice live in England so, why bother throwing that out the window? You've become quite good at describing the prairie scenery and throwing in good amounts of action scenes that keep you on edge, that's something I really enjoy about your writing.
Overall, the emotions are there, the action is there, but the objective isn't clear yet. I sure as hell am gonna keep reading this! I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
| Faye Forehand chapter 2 . 11/13
So far I like this. I hope to read more. :D