|Reviews for Untouchable|
| Jae Hwa chapter 1 . 1/13
My head is swirling at everything happening in this chapter. That's definitely a way to grab my attention. Ellie and Leon sound surprisingly close for a pair of teenage twins. Usually siblings fight a lot, especially twins. I like the imagery and simple way everyone was introduced, it was easy to read. I had a hard time keeping up, as characters kept popping up left and right.
I couldn't really find any errors in terms of grammar etc. That's great! This sounds like an epic adventure for the twins! Sorry its kind of short, I couldn't really find any fault besides too many characters appearing at once. Cheers!
| lirianstar chapter 1 . 1/7
I really liked this. The plot is fascinating, and the details are on point too.I'll be coming back to this! I'm curious to find out what happens next.
| Denka chapter 3 . 11/22/2017
Poor Ellie can't catch a break. Were they fighting over an Amazon Echo? lol