Reviews for Age Won't Fade
TVH Bookfan chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
The process of aging is something most young people don't want to think about, but given how fast time goes by and how some of the people closest to us may be elderly and fragile, it's not something we should ignore. I like the comparisons between old phones and trains and the more modern versions of them that we've grown so used to. It's strange how a single invention can undergo so much change in a century that it soon becomes unrecognizable to people who grew up using them in earlier eras. And to make matters even harder, the past is becoming just another Google search. If we want to know something that happened fifty years ago, what quicker way is there than just typing it up in a search browser and scrolling through the results? It gives you a lot think about, and I hope you can come up with other poems like this one soon.
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 11/19/2017
I don't know how to say this but it is just subtle and clear enough to convey the passage of time and change but also beautiful, abstract images. Good work.