|Reviews for Dawning|
| des chapter 8 . 1/20
It's interesting seeing how normalized slavery is in their culture and I love how much detail was put into this training session. Ty for the chapter, excited for the next one!
| Des chapter 7 . 1/17
I'm rooting so hard for Brin!
| Selens chapter 7 . 1/14
This is very interesting. Please continue.
| Des chapter 6 . 1/10
Loved this chapter! (and the last one too) It's really fun to have a whole chapter from Teson's POV, I already really like him. I love how there was only 3 lines of dialog but we still got to see so much of both their personalities, the last part was so endearing! Tysm for the fast updates!
| Des chapter 4 . 1/7
Loved the tension in this chapter! Teson is such an interesting & hard to read character I'm excited to learn more about him and see how their relationship progresses. Ty for the update!
| Lunarlilly chapter 3 . 1/4
Very good story. Anticipating the next chapter, keep it up!
| Des chapter 3 . 1/3
I'm really enjoying this so far! Your writing is so great at getting us into the characters heads and pulling at our heartstrings, we're only 3 chapters in and I already ache for Brin and his situation. I'm excited to see what happens next!
| Selen chapter 1 . 11/26/2017
Very good, please continue.