|Reviews for Incorruptible Love|
| Nightflame203 chapter 23 . 2/7
So Olly IS a girl? Because I thought she was Travis' boyfriend you were considering giving him earlier until she was specified as a she xP
Welp, that's a tense ending, but at least it wasn't quite as angsty as I thought it would be xD xD xD
Also, I apologize xD Most of my reviews are just me screaming in all caps xD xD xD
| Nightflame203 chapter 22 . 2/7
Dat's confusing xD xD xD xD xD Talk about a crazy family tree xD xD xD Poor Antonia xD xD Three biological parents xD xD xD xD xD xD xD
AND PAHINTONA IS ALIVEEE AND HEALTHY I AM VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY HAPPYYY THIS iS PROBABLY ONE OF MY FAVORITE SHIPS YOU'VE EVER CREATEDDDDDDDD
But there's an epilogue. And it goes more into Travis 0_0
But yay! No one died permanently! ...Yet 0_0
| Nightflame203 chapter 21 . 2/7
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NON ON NON ON NON NON NON NON NON NON ON NO YOU ARE KILLING OFF ANTONIAAA
YUUUSSS THANATOS SAVE HERRRRRRRR PLZZZZ MY SHIPPPPPP MUST LIVEEEEEEE
YYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THANATOS IS THE TRUE HEROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- Wait, does this story technically have a villain? Everyone's kinda redeemed themselves in my eyes xD xD xD
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PHINTONIA LIVES ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
AND KASSERIE IS CANONNNNNN
Wait 0_0 YOU SAID SOMEONE HAD TO DIE. DID YOU MEAN PERMANENTLY, OR WAS ANTONIA'S TECHNICAL DEATH ENOUGH
| Nightflame203 chapter 20 . 2/7
Whoa :OOOOOOO That's some technicalities as to Antonia's existence, but it makes sense to me xD xD xD Does David have Marchosias' memories of *coughs* conceiving her, or did Mrs. Adaams just come up to him one day like, "Hey, remember a few nights ago? Well, I'm pregnant," and he was like, "I have no memory of how this could have happened..."
AWWW, I think I like Thanatos more again :DDDD He just wants to avenge his little girl :') At least, that's what I know so far xD xD
IT IS WINTERRRR OMGOSH YASSSSS AND HER ENTRANCE WAS SO EPICCCCCCCC
Awwwwwwww does Marchosias love his daughter?
THat last sentence makes me unsure xP
| Nightflame203 chapter 19 . 2/7
Nopeeeee, I don't like Thanatos in THIS story xD
:'OOOOOOOOO TAYLOR GOT KIDNAPPED WHEN SHE WAS FIFTEEN?!
WAit, how old is she now? xD
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOA ANTONIA IS A SEMIDEMON ANTONIA IS MARCHOSIAS' DAUGHTER OMGOSH I KNEW SHE WAS SPECIAL BUT THAT LEGITIMATELY THREW ME SO OFF GUARD I THINK MY BRAIN ACTUALLY BROKE THIS TIME
| Nightflame203 chapter 18 . 2/7
AWWWW HER HEAD RESTING ON VALERIE'S LAP WHY DO THESE THINGS MAKE ME FANGIRL SO MUCH?!
AWWWWW SO MUCH KASSERIE AND YOU OPENED IT IN SUCH A CUTE SCENE I'M FANGIRLING OVER IT SO MUCH MORE THAN USUAL! (insert 50 !s)
DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW PHINEAS LOVES ANTONIA SO MUCHHHHHH
You gave Winter three jerky kids and only two nice ones in the Underworld? :'OO Poor Winter :'( I mean, I get they're also Thanatos' kids, but, well, I actually kinda liked him in our LokixFiona story xD xD xD 0xD
Ooooh, it's Travis xD Hey, is he bi, like his mom? (very random question to anyone who has no idea what I know xD xD xD xD)
| Nightflame203 chapter 17 . 2/5
PHINEAS IS WINTANOS' CHILDDDDDDDDDD
Aw, poor Antonia! DDDDDDDDDDD': AND poor Phineas!
NO PHIENAS REALLY LOVES YOU BABBY DON"T DO THIS PLZZZ
ANTONIA LOVES HIM TOOOOOOO
AWWWW YAASS ANGEL IS THE REAL HEROINE OF THIS STORY GIVE HIM A CHANCE ANTONIA PLZZZZ FOR MEEEEEEEE
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO ANTONIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOT AFTER YOUR RELATIONSHIP WAS GOING TO BEGIN HEALINGNGNGNGNGNGN
So I didn't quite cry, but now that I'm examining myself, I was much closer to it than normal xD
| Nightflame203 chapter 16 . 2/5
Welp, now everyone knows the truth!
OHHHHH, so THAT'S what happened!
I NEVER SHIPPED KASSERIE MORE THAN NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
So Nyssa and Phineas are half-siblings? Or full siblings? :OOOOOOO I sure HOPE they weren't dating! xD xD xD xD xD
| Nightflame203 chapter 15 . 2/5
AWWWWW YAY ANTONIA HELPED PHINEASSSS
THEY"RE DATING OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"Phin almost died." "I saw" xD xD xD She delivered that line so calmly I couldn't help laughing xD xD
WHOA :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO That scene where Val saved Kassidy was so EPICCCC
Also, VAL SAVED KASSIDY YAYYYYYYY
| Nightflame203 chapter 14 . 2/5
Huh, a type of humidity? Cool!
Uh, oh, Valerie's missing?! :O
Hmm *thoughtful emoji* I'm not sure how to feel about Nyssa right now
OMGOSH SHE'S WINTER'S DAUGHTER OKIE I THINK I LIKE HERRRRRRR
Aw, Antonia seems so jealous!
Nope, i don't like Nyssa right now :( But I wanted to xD
WHOA ANTONIA MIGHT BE HALF DEMON?! :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OooOOOOOOoooooh! I wonder what deal Valerie's making!
Hey, you don't get to talk, Thanatos! Didn't you force Winter to be your Underworld wife because of your feelings for her? xD
| Nightflame203 chapter 13 . 2/1
Poor Angel DDDD: She must really be terrified
:'OOOOOOOOOOOOO Not sensory overload! That's awful! DDDDDDDDDD': Poor babby Taylor :(((
Hey, The Flood! Yes, I did listen to that song xD xD It's pretty catchy
Whoa, Valerie! Language! xD xD xD Also, good luck bad guys, she's MAAADDD
SOOOOO MUCCCCCCHHHHHHHH PHINTONIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ISHIPIT AND THEY"RE GOING TO DE UNDERWORLDDDDD
| Nightflame203 chapter 12 . 1/31
PHINTONIAAAAAAAAA- But I must be careful fangirling, as I have been warned by you xD
Oh, I hope Angel's okay :/
YAYAYAY ADORABLS TAYLOR CAN BE THE HEROINEEEE
Uh, oh 0_0 I might have spotted what you were talking about... Nice job, making me stop fangirling with such an ominous conversation xD (Also, my apologies if this breaks the chat)
AWWWWWWWWWW POOORRRRR VAL DDDDDDDD':
Again, I hope Angel's as good as can be :/
| Nightflame203 chapter 11 . 1/30
NOOO KASSIDY WAS POSSESSSED?!
Valerie's reaction... I didn't need my heart, thank you...
Whoa :OOOOO Magic fight! That's always a good way to draw me in xD I thought that was pretty cool :DDDD
Wait... Angel's FOURTEEN in this story?! :OOOO Wow... Suddenly I'm feeling a lot closer to her xD
| Nightflame203 chapter 10 . 1/30
Poor Taylor :'( Poor babby with autism :(
"Switch Hensons" made me laugh way too hard xD xD xD xD xD
AWWWWW MORE PHINTONIAAAAA
NOOOOOOOOO NOT KASSIDYYYYYYYYYY DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': MY SHIIPPPPPPPPp
| Nightflame203 chapter 9 . 1/29
Aw! (Insert fifty million !s) DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': Poor Val! I can't even IMAGINE how horrible she must feel!
Wow... I want to say Antonia's mom is a bad mother, but she was just trying to do what was best for her daughter...
Yeah! Yeah, you try, Val!
I loved Taylor's and Phineas' acting of obliviousness xD xD xD
Sorry, Val, but that attempt to lighten the mood failed horribly xD And that's coming from a girl who can crack up at even the worst of puns
Uh, oh... 0_0 Idk whether to "awwww!" over the cuteness of the last sentence or focus on the scary part of it xD xD