Reviews for Valerie Saint and the Corrupted Soul
Nightflame203 chapter 23 . 2/7
So Olly IS a girl? Because I thought she was Travis' boyfriend you were considering giving him earlier until she was specified as a she xP

Welp, that's a tense ending, but at least it wasn't quite as angsty as I thought it would be xD xD xD

Also, I apologize xD Most of my reviews are just me screaming in all caps xD xD xD
Nightflame203 chapter 22 . 2/7
Dat's confusing xD xD xD xD xD Talk about a crazy family tree xD xD xD Poor Antonia xD xD Three biological parents xD xD xD xD xD xD xD

AND PAHINTONA IS ALIVEEE AND HEALTHY I AM VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY HAPPYYY THIS iS PROBABLY ONE OF MY FAVORITE SHIPS YOU'VE EVER CREATEDDDDDDDD

DAWWWWWWW KASSERIE

But there's an epilogue. And it goes more into Travis 0_0

But yay! No one died permanently! ...Yet 0_0
Nightflame203 chapter 21 . 2/7
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NON ON NON ON NON NON NON NON NON NON ON NO YOU ARE KILLING OFF ANTONIAAA

YUUUSSS THANATOS SAVE HERRRRRRRR PLZZZZ MY SHIPPPPPP MUST LIVEEEEEEE

YYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THANATOS IS THE TRUE HEROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- Wait, does this story technically have a villain? Everyone's kinda redeemed themselves in my eyes xD xD xD

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS PHINTONIA LIVES ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

AND KASSERIE IS CANONNNNNN

Wait 0_0 YOU SAID SOMEONE HAD TO DIE. DID YOU MEAN PERMANENTLY, OR WAS ANTONIA'S TECHNICAL DEATH ENOUGH
Nightflame203 chapter 20 . 2/7
Whoa :OOOOOOO That's some technicalities as to Antonia's existence, but it makes sense to me xD xD xD Does David have Marchosias' memories of *coughs* conceiving her, or did Mrs. Adaams just come up to him one day like, "Hey, remember a few nights ago? Well, I'm pregnant," and he was like, "I have no memory of how this could have happened..."

AWWW, I think I like Thanatos more again :DDDD He just wants to avenge his little girl :') At least, that's what I know so far xD xD

IT IS WINTERRRR OMGOSH YASSSSS AND HER ENTRANCE WAS SO EPICCCCCCCC

Awwwwwwww does Marchosias love his daughter?

THat last sentence makes me unsure xP
Nightflame203 chapter 19 . 2/7
Nopeeeee, I don't like Thanatos in THIS story xD

:'OOOOOOOOO TAYLOR GOT KIDNAPPED WHEN SHE WAS FIFTEEN?!

WAit, how old is she now? xD

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOA ANTONIA IS A SEMIDEMON ANTONIA IS MARCHOSIAS' DAUGHTER OMGOSH I KNEW SHE WAS SPECIAL BUT THAT LEGITIMATELY THREW ME SO OFF GUARD I THINK MY BRAIN ACTUALLY BROKE THIS TIME
Nightflame203 chapter 18 . 2/7
AWWWW HER HEAD RESTING ON VALERIE'S LAP WHY DO THESE THINGS MAKE ME FANGIRL SO MUCH?!

AWWWWW SO MUCH KASSERIE AND YOU OPENED IT IN SUCH A CUTE SCENE I'M FANGIRLING OVER IT SO MUCH MORE THAN USUAL! (insert 50 !s)

DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW PHINEAS LOVES ANTONIA SO MUCHHHHHH

You gave Winter three jerky kids and only two nice ones in the Underworld? :'OO Poor Winter :'( I mean, I get they're also Thanatos' kids, but, well, I actually kinda liked him in our LokixFiona story xD xD xD 0xD

Ooooh, it's Travis xD Hey, is he bi, like his mom? (very random question to anyone who has no idea what I know xD xD xD xD)
Nightflame203 chapter 17 . 2/5
PHINEAS IS WINTANOS' CHILDDDDDDDDDD

Aw, poor Antonia! DDDDDDDDDDD': AND poor Phineas!

NO PHIENAS REALLY LOVES YOU BABBY DON"T DO THIS PLZZZ

ANTONIA LOVES HIM TOOOOOOO

AWWWW YAASS ANGEL IS THE REAL HEROINE OF THIS STORY GIVE HIM A CHANCE ANTONIA PLZZZZ FOR MEEEEEEEE

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO ANTONIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOT AFTER YOUR RELATIONSHIP WAS GOING TO BEGIN HEALINGNGNGNGNGNGN

So I didn't quite cry, but now that I'm examining myself, I was much closer to it than normal xD
Nightflame203 chapter 16 . 2/5
Welp, now everyone knows the truth!

OHHHHH, so THAT'S what happened!

I NEVER SHIPPED KASSERIE MORE THAN NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

So Nyssa and Phineas are half-siblings? Or full siblings? :OOOOOOO I sure HOPE they weren't dating! xD xD xD xD xD
Nightflame203 chapter 15 . 2/5
AWWWWW YAY ANTONIA HELPED PHINEASSSS

THEY"RE DATING OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

"Phin almost died." "I saw" xD xD xD She delivered that line so calmly I couldn't help laughing xD xD

WHOA :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO That scene where Val saved Kassidy was so EPICCCC

Also, VAL SAVED KASSIDY YAYYYYYYY

0_0 WHAT?!
Nightflame203 chapter 14 . 2/5
Huh, a type of humidity? Cool!

Uh, oh, Valerie's missing?! :O

Hmm *thoughtful emoji* I'm not sure how to feel about Nyssa right now

OMGOSH SHE'S WINTER'S DAUGHTER OKIE I THINK I LIKE HERRRRRRR

Aw, Antonia seems so jealous!

Nope, i don't like Nyssa right now :( But I wanted to xD

WHOA ANTONIA MIGHT BE HALF DEMON?! :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

OooOOOOOOoooooh! I wonder what deal Valerie's making!

Hey, you don't get to talk, Thanatos! Didn't you force Winter to be your Underworld wife because of your feelings for her? xD
Nightflame203 chapter 13 . 2/1
Poor Angel DDDD: She must really be terrified

:'OOOOOOOOOOOOO Not sensory overload! That's awful! DDDDDDDDDD': Poor babby Taylor :(((

Hey, The Flood! Yes, I did listen to that song xD xD It's pretty catchy

Whoa, Valerie! Language! xD xD xD Also, good luck bad guys, she's MAAADDD

SOOOOO MUCCCCCCHHHHHHHH PHINTONIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ISHIPIT AND THEY"RE GOING TO DE UNDERWORLDDDDD
Nightflame203 chapter 12 . 1/31
PHINTONIAAAAAAAAA- But I must be careful fangirling, as I have been warned by you xD

Oh, I hope Angel's okay :/

YAYAYAY ADORABLS TAYLOR CAN BE THE HEROINEEEE

Uh, oh 0_0 I might have spotted what you were talking about... Nice job, making me stop fangirling with such an ominous conversation xD (Also, my apologies if this breaks the chat)

AWWWWWWWWWW POOORRRRR VAL DDDDDDDD':

Again, I hope Angel's as good as can be :/
Nightflame203 chapter 11 . 1/30
NOOO KASSIDY WAS POSSESSSED?!

Valerie's reaction... I didn't need my heart, thank you...

Whoa :OOOOO Magic fight! That's always a good way to draw me in xD I thought that was pretty cool :DDDD

Wait... Angel's FOURTEEN in this story?! :OOOO Wow... Suddenly I'm feeling a lot closer to her xD
Nightflame203 chapter 10 . 1/30
PHINTONIAAAAAAA

Poor Taylor :'( Poor babby with autism :(

"Switch Hensons" made me laugh way too hard xD xD xD xD xD

AWWWWW MORE PHINTONIAAAAA

NOOOOOOOOO NOT KASSIDYYYYYYYYYY DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': MY SHIIPPPPPPPPp
Nightflame203 chapter 9 . 1/29
Aw! (Insert fifty million !s) DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD': Poor Val! I can't even IMAGINE how horrible she must feel!

Wow... I want to say Antonia's mom is a bad mother, but she was just trying to do what was best for her daughter...

Yeah! Yeah, you try, Val!

I loved Taylor's and Phineas' acting of obliviousness xD xD xD

Sorry, Val, but that attempt to lighten the mood failed horribly xD And that's coming from a girl who can crack up at even the worst of puns

Uh, oh... 0_0 Idk whether to "awwww!" over the cuteness of the last sentence or focus on the scary part of it xD xD
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