Reviews for The Wicked Circus
Coffee and Roses chapter 1 . 4/29/2018
Very captivating and interesting.
Kinola chapter 17 . 4/10/2018
The text in the last 2 chapters looks pretty glitched up. Just so you know.
Kinola chapter 3 . 12/6/2017
Awesome story so far. I look forward to reading more.
Anita Rosemary chapter 1 . 12/2/2017
This was a very pleasant surprise.
You might want to fix the description, as there are grammatical errors that leave a bit to be desired. Maybe cut out the listed creatures and just leave 'supernatural creatures'?
I absolutely love the first few paragraphs. The perspective of the audience is done well. At the same time, you can't help but want to feel sorry for the Wickeds.
Second-person perspective is pretty hard to use. If you've put enough thought into it and decided that you want to use it, then I have no objections.
I can see this as a movie of some kind.
I like the idea of using stories as fragments, although there might be a better way to separate them here.