Reviews for Christmas Short Story
One Winged A2 chapter 2 . 12/4/2017
By no means is this a bad story. It is in fact decently well written.
However, this is pure smut, meaning it really should be rated MA. Please note that Fictionpress hasn't allowed MA content since 2002 if my memory serves me right. My advice is to either edit it to make it less explicit or write a 'fade to black' lemon for here, and post the uncut version on a site that allows MA content such as Archive of Our Own.
This is coming from someone who has been unfortunate enough to have stories deleted due to MA content in the past, and I hate seeing it happen to other aspiring writers.
Best regards,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE