|Reviews for Requiem Verse|
| Jae Hwa chapter 1 . 3/15
Cool concept. Although short, it makes me wonder what's going on. I found myself confused by who's who, since we weren't given names. Hopefully, that fixes itself in upcoming chapters!
| Om Nom Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 1/15
You may want to correct the grammar of the dialogue in this story. If the dialogue is associated with a speech verb you'll want to use a comma (question or exclamation mark followed by lowercase since the dialogue is still part of that sentence). For instance:
"That's great," he said. Or "That's great!" he shouted.
If it is associated with an action verb use a period.
"That's great." He nodded his head.
| SleepyGoron chapter 2 . 12/28/2017
This was really good the music theme is awesome and the krachs are cool enemies :) Hope to see more soon