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Skia Shadow chapter 1 . 12/6
Wow. This is good poetry. One idea – you don't have to follow it – but you might want to either have shorter lines or increase the spacing (if you can do that on FictionPress), just for aesthetic and easier reading. But this is great!

Also, compiling all your works into a story sounds like it would definitely be interesting, though there might be conflicts between different pieces of writing? idk.