Reviews for Smoke
Ckh chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
I dig the innocent tone of the poem that you managed to establish. Lines like "I thought it was magic!" were great at setting the mood. It sells how warped the actuality of the situation is (a mother smoking in front of her daughter and saying its alright) compared to the childish expectation of the child. A good poem, I feel.
CheddarBrat789 chapter 1 . 12/10/2017
I'm not the biggest poetry fan in the world, but I did enjoy this piece. I really liked those last twelve lines, because of the very relatable, thought-provoking message they contain. Who knew a poem about a mom smoking in front of her kids could be so deep?

That's really all I have to say. No complaints here.