Reviews for Time Machine
euansawakening chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
This is a very profound allegory for altzheimers! The impressive and nuanced take on the thought process of someone suffering from such a condition is incredibly striking to the reader. It's clear that this was written with rigorous passion; perhaps it was unfortunatley inspired by personal experience - though this is of course where the greatest poetry comes from. Structure and form were a little shaky, but overall I see a lot of potential in your writing! I'll definetly be sticking around to see what else you produce.