Reviews for Writers Block
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
now that is fabulous (:
The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 1/5
I like the format, alternating rhyming lines with non rhyming lines gives you the sense of continuity of a completely rhyming poem, but without the formal tone that normally accompanies it. It would sound pretty casual spoken out loud, while still being identifiable as a poem. I'll remember that next time I decide to try writing a poem in a different format than my usual rhyming couplets. There is one thing though. Instead of "pass by me," maybe you should change it to "pass me by," or just "pass by." "Pass by me," isn't a phrase you hear often, it sounds really awkward. Other than that it's great!
Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
You have captured the feelings of good ol' writer's block very well.
This was a nice little piece to read.
~ Zukafu