Reviews for All my everlasting love
Fall Storm chapter 1 . 2/26/2019
It's sad but it makes you read it good work
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 2/4/2019
Oho, so it's a prologue of sorts? Will this be one of those stories where it 'starts' at the end, then goes back all the way to when the events start until it comes in full circle?
Even though it's supposed to be sad, it feels kind of impersonal and distant so it's more like someone reciting a history lesson than pouring their feelings out. Is that intentional, I wonder?
Either way, as a beginning, it is pretty intriguing. Keep it up *w*)b
The Keyboard Poet chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
What a sad poem
EternalE'lir chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
Emotionally gripping! Definitely make you wonder what happened to him, for it seems to be implied that he took his own life, but it also appears that he did so unwillingly to protect his family.
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
Yep my friend, you are cruel! :)

I honestly felt the emotions that the reader would have felt. I've lost a few friends and said my goodbyes and this story just brought all those emotions back up!

So now you've made me cry! :O I love this story and I can't wait for future installments.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Intriguing. I’m not sure if protagonist died protecting their family or took his own life. In either case the thoughts presented are poignant. Hoping answers are in future additions.