Reviews for The Lady with the Red Umbrella
Bestzulen chapter 1 . 12/26/2017
This story was very good! I would encourage you to write more like it!
J.Kuzzey chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
Not at all what I was expecting. Thoroughly enjoyed this quick bit. I like how the story's tempo changed. In the beginning it was a bit slower, building up this world and these two characters, leading us in the direction we assumed it would go. Then, the end, it picks up, focusing on dialog, forcing us into a spiral, questioning what we had assumed up to that point. This is definitely unique. Good work. From a technical standpoint, I didn't see a single error. Great job on that, as well. Keep it up!