Reviews for A Flurry of Color
LiveAndHope chapter 1 . 12/29/2017

I've never been good at poetry (I wish I was!) but I do love reading poetry. I like that your poem has that 'almost tangible' feel to it (if that makes sense).
I don't know how you'd accomplish it, but I feel like this needs another paragraph/stanza in it, just to build more of the imagery and feeling to it, but that might be my thoughts rather than the thoughts of other readers.

My thoughts weren't very constructive, but hopefully it helps? I look forward to reading more!
allbookmonkey chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
Cool! Makes me think about my own life. :)
AngelicMidnight chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
Omg, this is really good! For your first poetry post, I applaud you. This is amazing. :D