|Reviews for Footsteps|
| AngelicMidnight chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
Interesting and mysterious. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but said is a dead word, maybe replace it with something else... Here are examples:
(A spelling mistake where it says "are that person are trying to prank me" It's "Is that person..")
"That was weird," the guard mumbled under his breath, raising a brow as he resumed patrolling.
"Is that person trying to prank me? Damn!" the guard snapped, running his hand through his slick black hair, an annoyed expression on his face.
"Let's go to the morgue again," stated, a bead of sweat running down his forehead.
"What's the matter, Bart?" A man in a long white coat questioned with a nervous tone in his voice.
"Oh, !" Bart spoke with a tone of relief before responding back with another question, "What are you doing here?"
Hope this helps! 3