|Reviews for The Tragedy of Bynik|
| PlasmaTorch chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
This is quite an interesting story. Maybe subsequent chapters can be from the POV of the creatures that Quvik and Bynerin created? A sentient alien race not so different from our own, with their own unique mythology and traditions.
Some of the people at deviant art create really unique looking aliens. Your story made me think of one piece in particular. Its called Protest by Abiogenisis...
Another question that springs to mind is, just how powerful are Quvik and Bynerin? They seem to be on the same scale as someone like Dr. Manhattan.