|Reviews for A Lighthouse in The Fog|
| JustCallMeMissy chapter 3 . 1/16
I finally had time to sit down and read this! I really like how Chirag is developing. He's learning survival and yet is still retaining his kindness towards others. Curious to see how it plays out with the dying woman :)
| addledwalrus chapter 2 . 1/3
What haapened to Brown and McCracken was tragic, but it felt a little too rushed.
Some lead up might have made it more coherent with the rest of the chapter, as well as have a bigger impact.
| addledwalrus chapter 1 . 1/1
Reading this easily makes me feel like I' a high budget sci-fi film.
The flow is great and I have so many questions waiting to be answered.
| JustCallMeMissy chapter 1 . 1/1
I like this Silent Hills vibe this story gives me with how you've described the atmosphere. I'm curious to see how this ends up for the three.
I would recommend going back to proofread a few more times to fix some minor errors. :)