Reviews for The Clouds We Chase |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. You know what, you can publish your book in NovelStar, and I am sure that a lot of readers will love your work. |
![]() ![]() love it that you're back! your writing is enrapturing as always, and it is the perfect end to a hard day at work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this and bow she discovering herself and actively working for it. She is purposefully not falling back into their relationship. I think that's so smart and important. |
![]() ![]() Yess! Finally! I really hope Kyle comes to his senses soon before he loses her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy for the update. I enjoyed seeing Kyle's side. I hope she doesn't forgive him so easily though, even if he's apologetic. What he did was really shitty and immature. It also seemed liked they were slightly too dependent on each other. So I would like to see her grow as an individual and seriously consider what it would mean to forgive Kyle and enter into a relationship with him. He needs to be held accountable for his cruel actions. Obviously I want them to be together eventually, but I want him to have to work for hit and for her to work on herself. As readers, we've gotten to know her outside of her friendship with Kyle, and I want that to continue for a bit. |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for giving us a glimpse into his POV! I can appreciate both of their perspectives just from how you told each chapter. And I'm thrilled he is aware how much he screwed up! Thank you for posting! |
![]() ![]() Yes! It's been forever! |
![]() ![]() I love the support she is getting but I thought Evangeline's reaction a little... weird. I wish we could see what he was thinking... Thank you for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I'm glad she does have more friends and they're stepping up. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() Yes! It's been fifteen years! Amazing! I hope Kyle wises up soon or else she may just move on without him. |
![]() ![]() Uggghhh, waiting for the next chapter feels like I'm going through withdrawal! |
![]() ![]() Well, at least he feels like crap too.;) I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon, but it fits the cadence of the story, methodically attempting to move on then getting blindsided by random contact. Thank you again for sharing your work! |
![]() ![]() It is definitely like a break up, trying to make a new normal. I admire her strength and overall lack of bitterness. Thank you for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This girl deserves a friend. Someone who can distract her and help her process. I feel for her. Not only was she in love with him, it appears he was her only true confidant and friend. Sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this. it's interesting. And she seems like a strong character. it's possible to be strong while your heart is breaking. Looking forward to an update. |