Reviews for The Clouds We Chase
Joeson chapter 1 . 5/2/2021
Great start! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. You know what, you can publish your book in NovelStar, and I am sure that a lot of readers will love your work.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/29/2018
love it that you're back! your writing is enrapturing as always, and it is the perfect end to a hard day at work :)
oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 7 . 5/27/2018
I love this and bow she discovering herself and actively working for it. She is purposefully not falling back into their relationship. I think that's so smart and important.
Krimson Crusader chapter 7 . 5/21/2018
Yess! Finally! I really hope Kyle comes to his senses soon before he loses her...
oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 6 . 3/18/2018
Happy for the update. I enjoyed seeing Kyle's side. I hope she doesn't forgive him so easily though, even if he's apologetic. What he did was really shitty and immature. It also seemed liked they were slightly too dependent on each other. So I would like to see her grow as an individual and seriously consider what it would mean to forgive Kyle and enter into a relationship with him. He needs to be held accountable for his cruel actions. Obviously I want them to be together eventually, but I want him to have to work for hit and for her to work on herself. As readers, we've gotten to know her outside of her friendship with Kyle, and I want that to continue for a bit.
London Li chapter 6 . 3/10/2018
Thank you so much for giving us a glimpse into his POV! I can appreciate both of their perspectives just from how you told each chapter. And I'm thrilled he is aware how much he screwed up! Thank you for posting!
Krimson Crusader chapter 6 . 3/9/2018
Yes! It's been forever!
London Li chapter 5 . 1/30/2018
I love the support she is getting but I thought Evangeline's reaction a little... weird. I wish we could see what he was thinking... Thank you for the update!
oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 5 . 1/28/2018
Yay! I'm glad she does have more friends and they're stepping up. Looking forward to more!
Krimson-Crusader chapter 5 . 1/28/2018
Yes! It's been fifteen years! Amazing! I hope Kyle wises up soon or else she may just move on without him.
Krimson chapter 4 . 1/20/2018
Uggghhh, waiting for the next chapter feels like I'm going through withdrawal!
London Li chapter 4 . 1/16/2018
Well, at least he feels like crap too.;) I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon, but it fits the cadence of the story, methodically attempting to move on then getting blindsided by random contact. Thank you again for sharing your work!
London Li chapter 3 . 1/16/2018
It is definitely like a break up, trying to make a new normal. I admire her strength and overall lack of bitterness. Thank you for the update
oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 3 . 1/16/2018
This girl deserves a friend. Someone who can distract her and help her process. I feel for her. Not only was she in love with him, it appears he was her only true confidant and friend. Sad.
oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 2 . 1/10/2018
I'm liking this. it's interesting. And she seems like a strong character. it's possible to be strong while your heart is breaking. Looking forward to an update.
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