Reviews for Rituals
DemigodessOfEternity chapter 1 . 1/4
Great poem. I like the rhythmic structure and the way it description develops across the poem and gives a real insight into the character/author. Excellent job overall!
The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 1/3
This . . . This is good. You can really feel the emotion behind it, something I feel like I struggle with. You can feel the despair and the desire for an end as well as the unreasoning will to go on. Brace yourself, here comes the constructive criticism. Somewhere time ago doesn't make sense to me, I think replacing time with long would help. Instead of "alone in this doubts," I think you meant "alone in these doubts.""Perpetually," instead of "perpetual," would make more sense. "Magick," is the archaic spelling of "magic." Sometimes in poetry, mistakes are purposeful, if any of these were on purpose, just ignore them. Again, good job.