|Reviews for The Three Bad Boys|
| Hwannie chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
I had no idea what was going on, for starters. The characters didn't stand out and I constantly had no idea who was who with the barrages of characters. Second, to commit a crime, you need a motive. Are they psychopaths? Did their siblings wrong them? We need to know the million dollar question: what spurred them on? The ending also got me, why would a two-year-old know how to operate bombs? I can only imagine this is set in a dystopian, messed up timeline.
Apart from those, your grammar and spelling are spot on. The sentences weren't choppy and the lines were distributed fine. Also, may I ask where you got your inspiration from?