Reviews for Don't Do Anything Stupid - High Maintenance I
Guest chapter 26 . 2/21
Jaz108, Gianna (something), JazWillow and different versions thereof are all the usernames I remember going by on this site. Maybe I might've used Evxie at some point, but I think I started using that after I stopped being active here. That one you mentioned does not look familiar at all, so I don't think so. I'll try to unlock my account though :P
Guest chapter 25 . 2/18
So I seem to be locked out of my old account (Jaz108, latest update in early 2006 xD). And then out of no where I got a bunch of email notifications that an author I follow posted new content! So at some point over a decade ago you wrote stuff I enjoyed reading, and still do I'm looking forward to more updates!
mavinclark chapter 20 . 2/7
It's going well. I hope you add layers to Cathy other then stuck up though, she seems kinda flat. It's great though.
Jojo chapter 18 . 2/3
Hope there's going to be a part 2. Loved this story and actually can't believe how few reviews there are. Only negative for me is the last chapter seemed to jump to the birth pretty quickly and I was hoping for more Theo and Clara interaction. Apart from that it was great, keep up the good work
Guest chapter 16 . 1/28
I really like your story. Good job!
mavinclark chapter 16 . 1/28
I'm not sure where the character's are going in their relationships but the tension is palpable and your descriptions are on point. Good job so far.
Jojo chapter 16 . 1/28
Hi. I've been reading for a while now and I'm loving the story so far, it's the only one at the moment that I look for updates. Love Theo but he's so clueless hopefully he will see Cathy's true colours soon. The pace of the story is good not moving too slowly but leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/21
So far, I'm enjoying this. Clara seems like a likable character, and I particularly enjoy the comment about the sex not being that great, as well as her confusion over why she'd went for him, despite him not being her type. I also like her concern about whether he was with his girlfriend or not at the time.

It did feel like there were a few too many commas sprinkled throughout, so it may help to do a quick reread and ensure there aren't any extra. Also, I'd love to see a little more world-building going on, because I had trouble imagining the rooms and spaces they're in throughout the chapter (I believe the term is white-rooming; two characters in a white room having a conversation). It's something I continually struggle with, so perhaps that's why it sticks out to me. ;)

Overall, I liked this chapter and look forward to more from you!