so Harrison is the guy that Kendal ran off with? maybe? They know about whatever caused him to go to the Green/ hospital? Kendal was already pregnant by Anthony when she left but didn't realise and he has a secret child?

More pretty please

Have just started reading your story.
I love the characters, the humour, your style of writing, the way it flows.
Best story I have read in a while

Hey I’m here I was a bit late but I made it... so like yay

I love your story! I love Anthony and his interaction with Leigh and I can't wait for an update :)

Oh my! What an amazing new book! How fantastically it is written and how quirky and whimsical the characters - verdict: LOVE. IT.

And now for serious commenting...

"I swear on my social life's grave" - great line
"A city built by optimists" - great line
"Jeep Hugger" - ...you guessed it, great line.

Not sure if it's at my end or at Fictionpress, but this is just a bunch of html code, when I look at it. The next chapter isn't. Just thought I'd let you know, 'cause I'd really like to read. ;)