|Reviews for Dead Girl Walking|
| good story chapter 1 . 1/12
good story but ur main character is kind of a douche bag she reminds me of me when I dont get enough breakfast to eat in the morning bcuz my mom is too busy crying over her dysfunctional husband to get out of bed and make me something
| Faodail chapter 1 . 1/12
Awesome story! Really liked your use of emotions with the interactions between characters. There was alot of mystery I wanted to know, like what actions made Charlotte feel as if her father didn't love her, how is she able to kill men of she is a ghost thing, is she actually killing people or is it more of a apparition of her internal conflict.
At the same time I kinda do not want the answers. It reminded me of an edgar allen poe writing style, in the sense that you get a snippet of these characters, with a little bit of morbid, and you dont get all your questions answered but the ending resolution is so satisfactory that you don't feel a loss at not knowing every detail. Fantastic story!