|Reviews for When the world froze|
| The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 4/6
. . . I'm . . . I'm so sorry. And I know that's stupid to say, that it doesn't make anything better, but it was either say that or say nothing, and I couldn't just look away and pretend I never saw this.
*coughs loudly* Anyways, I hate to do this on this particular story, and I probably shouldn't do this on this particular story, but I hate leaving reviews without constructive criticism. In the third paragraph, fourth sentence, it's "too", not "to".
. . . I wish I could have been there to help you through that . . .
| AStarElvenLight chapter 1 . 3/8
This poem is a powerful, intense description of loss and grief. Your words bring images to mind as sharply as a sword piercing the soul.