Reviews for A Mermaid's King : Book Three : Niat Liare Trilogy
shinju asuka chapter 13 . 11h
"... You look after husband, I look after you."
Aww Rune is good being sweet to her now. I am excited about Tali meeting his parents!
Galquesta chapter 12 . 2/19
Just writing in general.

What experience have you gained by writing?
shinju asuka chapter 12 . 2/18
Yup i agree his way is good enough. At least now she wasn't uncomfortable at his staring.
shinju asuka chapter 11 . 2/18
Yaasss Tali! Good job girl! Make him work to earn your trust! I think he did quiet good though. But still to do more for her.
Galquesta chapter 11 . 2/17
Awww he's a least trying /happy sounds/

Also, how do you write stories well?

I wanna know
shinju asuka chapter 10 . 2/12
Yay for new friend she had! I'm interested in her new stone. Probably it could help her understanding her dream.
Galquesta chapter 10 . 2/9
"Rune's not doing so hot right now...But has he ever? I way too hard on him, I know...But he makes it so easy."

Stop picking on the heartbroken merman.

Character interactions and development.
shinju asuka chapter 9 . 2/6
Because he (seemed) tried to reach her out, i gave him half point now haha. Probably after what Zorhan has said to him, now he tried to pay attention to her. Of course after what he had done and how Tali was, it was unnerving for her instead. I am glad she was that angry and was able to convey what she truly felt. If only she could bring up the topic about him and Illia... Let's see what Rune would do after listening to Tali's burst.
shinju asuka chapter 8 . 2/4
Rune please... How could you leave your mate after seeing she had nightmare? *sigh*
But i am as surprised as Tali was when hearing his answer xD
Poor her overheard Zorhan's talking :( It made her not wanting seeing Illia :( Was her dream related to her friend?
Galquesta chapter 7 . 2/2
Its weird,
He's not Aris cold but...


Yauay, she a princess now
Angel Cauldwell chapter 7 . 2/1
I think Rune is still in love with Illia. Part of the reason that I think he is so sulky. I think part of it that he is unsure of what to make of having a human as a mate but than again if he was paired with Illia that he would still have a human as a mate.
Galquesta chapter 6 . 1/31
Rune is one sulky boi
He needa stop.

And omg look!
She has children :'))))

They grow up so fast
shinju asuka chapter 6 . 1/30
So happy that Naeiri and Aris were doing well together! Aww...
It surprised me that it's been 8 years! I wonder what happened to him...
shinju asuka chapter 5 . 1/25
Aww... She is really nice putting Illia and Rune first. But why didn't he talk at all? Hopefully it wasn't a bad sign.
Galquesta chapter 5 . 1/25
Dont tell me his still gushing over the queen?
Is he not happy to have a mate?

No sulky boy.
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