|Reviews for After School Friendship|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
This was very cute, and what a compliment to alltheeagles that you wanted to write fan fiction of their work!
Watch out for proper capitalization after and following spoken segments, as I noticed there were still a few spots causing you trouble. Remember, if it’s “she said” following a spoken bit, there would be a comma instead of a period, and the s would be lower case. Example: “I cannot stand this song,” she said.
Well done painting a picture of your main character!
| Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 1/24/2018
This was such a cute little read!
The triplets in particular - so mischievous and adorable all at the same time. And little Paws too, slyly sneaking her way in there.
Always a lovely time spent. Enough said.
Until the next one!
| alltheeagles chapter 1 . 1/21/2018
I love this!
The triplets are exactly what I imagined them to be, and Paws had a major role!
Have I mentioned that I love this?
There was humour, and bittersweet moments, and that perfectly-captured first-date awkwardness.
I MUST tell you that I love this!
:D :D :D