|Reviews for She Who Cried Wolf|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/29
I love the twist to this fable!
My only suggestion would be to watch out for punctuation and capitalization following dialogue.
“This is one correct method,” she said, drawing attention to the comma and lowercase s in she.
“However, if you go right to action or discription, use a period and a capital.” She hoped the demonstration would be helpful.
Loved the story! Well done!