Reviews for The Threat on the Net
ViciousCerberus666 chapter 1 . 2/11
That's deep kinda an obsession story and of course I love them.
Torey Hylton chapter 1 . 2/3
You're not a bad writer, not by a long mile, however, your writing style is quite strange, and a bit hard to get into. It doesn't seem to flow very well especially with the characters thoughts in brackets. I didn't exactly get the story either as it was hard to follow. You use open sentences a lot (not sure what they're called but they end like this...). I like to use them too, but I use them sparingly. Like I said, you're not a bad writer, but definitely room for improvement. I don't want to put you off. We are all learning here. Good luck with your writing.