Reviews for Bound to You
atalantea chapter 1 . 2/18
I love the ending most. There was a build to it and a definite punch. I love that longing and hope and that little resignation about the current situation and in getting over it.
I like the metaphor of being bound to something that is not actually there. Very real like smoke but not something you can touch.
Enjoyed this piece. Keep writing!
Love,
Ata
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 2/20/2018
Oh, this is so beautiful. Maybe more so because i feel the chains of my own past relationships - some stronger than others, dependent on my mood. You do a wonderful job throughout, creating effective imagery and metaphor. I especially enjoyed the 4th stanza. It describes perfectly that intangible bond we create with people, even long after we've said our final farewell. So hard to describe, but we feel it deep down. Great job.