|Reviews for WIP|
| Jae Hwa chapter 1 . 2/8
This is certainly a WIP. You switched from first person to third person abruptly in the middle. 'I' suddenly became 'Kella said.' That said, I really enjoyed reading from a child's perspective, it was fun.
I liked how innocent Kella's curiosity wad depicted. It really seemed as though a child was telling me a story. The setting was great, I really like stories set in medieval times. While I have no idea how housewives acted at that time, but I imagine they were like the 'pig wives' Kella described. I couldn't find anything wrong besides that tiny mistake I mentioned.
Good job, I look forward to the next chapter!