|Reviews for Messages from a Father: You are a Woman|
| AStarElvenLight chapter 1 . 3/8
This poem is thought provoking and you paint a clear picture of the kind of person the speaker is as well as the daughter to whom he is directing his rant. I feel I know them both well.
| SaltwaterExtended chapter 1 . 2/25
It's a bit confusing how the perspective changes suddenly throughput, but otherwise it made sense.
I agree with most, but I also don't want to spend review time in arguement or debate. The poem itself looks fine, and the subject is definitely interesting. Needed in some ways. Overdonejn others. But I'm discussing it, aren't I?
Well-done in writing.