Reviews for Let's Pretend
naaah chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
I brok in tears, I kind of relate, sadly enough.. but it's so powerful and the message it sends is so important in our modern life.. keep up the great work and may god bless your soul.. 3
A Lovestruck A2 chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
Wow, I wasn't sure what to expect when I first read this.
Normally, reviewing poetry isn't my thing, despite the fact that I have written two myself, but here I go.
I love it.
I have a guilty pleasure in writing, and that's the darker stuff. This is emotional, and it makes the reader feel in touch with the character. It isn't just a flat piece of literature like so many poems tend to be for that, well done.
Best regards,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE