Reviews for Castle Crumbling
AKrey177 chapter 3 . 2/25
I think your ideas about how Mary might have acted in a universe only a micron different from this one are entirely credible. How did she not make an attempt on Elizabeth's life at some point?! The only thing missing, I thought, was the effect her faith would have on her plans, but maybe her madness explains that. As ever, gorgeously written and appropriately disturbing. I struggled with the end of chapter 2 - it made me feel a bit ill, but that's the effect a well-written scene like that should have.

No Mary... no Elizabeth. Would Queen Jane have turned out to be our greatest monarch after all?
Guest chapter 3 . 2/25
This is so beautifully written :)