|Reviews for Bleed Me Hollow|
| hannahisnotarealperson chapter 2 . 3/1
Hey, this seems like a cool idea (and so great that it's already written before you start posting chapters, I know I am terrible for needing validation or I lose enthusiasm) but if you're still editing one thing that i would say is that quite often it feels as though you're trying to sound more intelligent than necessary; "dihydrogen monoxide" just say water, there isn't any need to add flamboyance to it. Whilst it doesn't have the effect here, often using terms which are unnecessarily complex makes the reader feel condescended to.
Or maybe that's just me hating being reminded of chemistry, but other than that it seems like a interesting start and I can't wait to see it progress
| EtheralMagus chapter 1 . 2/26
Your writing style is very beautiful. I think it sounds interesting.
| DarkHumorInHumanForm chapter 1 . 2/26
I love your writing style! I hope you update this soon. I seems like a really good story idea